Talk Talk

Beautiful post on Today’s Author by Sharon Bonin-Pratt about dialogue and the “spaces” in between.

Today's Author

people_talkingBaby talk. Small talk. Sexy talk. Rant, whisper, inform. Stutter, harangue, order. Insult, complain, gossip. Coo. Share transgressions with friends and make them your confessors. Share plans with colleagues and make them your partners. Share rumors with neighbors and make them your enemies. Talk all day and long into the night. Talk talk.

If I can talk I should easily be able to write dialogue as true as a razor is straight, right? Simply transfer all that talking to words on paper, just the way I hear it, just the way I say it.

So we, um, just write what we talk about and, can you, um, pass me the chips, thanks, and it’s sorta like what I was saying, ya know? Oof, that’s a terrible take.

I guess I have to clean up my speech for the written page because that sentence, 28 words, said diddly squat.

My travail…

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About K. E. Douglas

Writer, teacher, artist, student and traveller - I hope to be all of these things for as long as I'm alive.

Posted on June 18, 2014, in Uncategorized. Bookmark the permalink. 1 Comment.

  1. Thank you, Kris, I am honored and humbled by this re-blog.
    You might also like to visit my personal blog, Sharon Bonin-Pratt’s Ink Flare:
    http://sharonboninpratt.wordpress.com/

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